Story: Someone got lost in love | new love story | Romantic story |
Author: Sameer Rahman
The first episode
There is no sleeping environment on the other side of the road, no one is in front of me and nobody is behind me. I am going alone. The highway road in the entire atmosphere is not the
same as the people usually come in two cars. Absolutely not like the environment of the village, it is completely different ... In the small environment, the environment of the nibi has come out of the atmosphere, in the city environment. In the city environment ..... I do not like anything in the city Highway Roads I like it because I can walk alone in this road and I can walk alone alone. I think this is fine and I am walking lightly on the road, I walk in some way after seeing a girl. I can not see the look, I can see only the back and I started thinking about nothing, and at about 10 seconds I came along with my daughter. Ralem, but aside from the other side, I began to walk straight away from the light, looking at the girl after some time. But I can not see the face yet. I could see the face of the girl after the walk along with the walk. I can not say that it is so beautiful to look beautiful Kajal in your eyes ... Lipstick and lips are open, so talking to the dancer ... For some time I forgot that At the Highway Road, I was looking at the girl at a glance. I did not know how long it was when I went out of the car. When a car went out of the vehicle, I lost my breath and I looked around and thought that I am on the highway road. When I looked back at the girl, I saw and looked at me that I looked at him, he stole his eye and removed his eyes from me and looked at the other side. I did not smile but I did not smile on my laughter, and I started walking in my mind. It was almost evening that Sue 'Mama is now farewell to the world on the verge but I do not believe in my mind. I walked a little while in the afternoon and so soon the evening Why is it? Evening may not have happened so much, but I could see the girl some more time. And in some way if she could know the name of the girl It would have been better, but it might not be possible now ... I finally saw that the girl started going with a rickshaw. I stayed on her way, and noticed that she looked back at me almost four times, maybe she wanted to say something but what I did not understand that ... and I also went to my house to eat at night and sleep now, my university will be the first day of life, but I must go. I forgot to give my identity to my name. Ayan .. I am Anas' fast year's sha and tomorrow is my first day of college and I have a devil, my younger sister, and why I said the devil then why will I find out why Satan Saying .. Well, now I'm good to talk to you. Good night ....................
Will continue ... (forgive the wrong error).
đ Hi Shakil, you're quite a talented writer, aren't you? I'm not a writer but I enjoy good writings. Your love story, showed how much you're a solitaire. That you're quiet and are quite an observant. You communicate with your heart a lot. That's all the impression I got after I read it.
ReplyDeleteOne thing, I think you need to work a bit on paragraphing. It will be easier for your readers to know and to understand the plots. I think it will help you too to break down one big ideas to a few small ones.
Oh yeah, you posted this story in my music community. So I would suggest that you also include a song or two, that suitable for your story. The songs that support your story. That's why the name is : my music my story my expression community. I would like people to be able to express themselves thru their music. You can too. You can post your music in the comment column under your story.
Well done, Shakil. I'm glad having you in my music community. Come on share your story and your music too that support your story. Cya around G+
Cheers,
Joeđˇ
@my music my story my expression community.
Thanks for the comment I hope to share something better then
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